2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Yu (2003) begins to study the identity of Tom, from the identity of Tom, he ensures that the good or evil was not depended on the identity, and the true love was not rely upon what class you lived. In addition, the subjects which she researched just concern the major characters. She is lack to study the common people in low class, which made her evidence was not persuaded. Yu (2003) begins to study the identity of Tom, from the identity of Tom, he ensures that the good or evil was not to depend on the identity, and the true love was not to rely upon what class you lived.