2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文章衔接手法恰当；文章能够较丰富地使用高级词汇，可是文章用词太过单一；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵。

Yu (2003) begins to study the identity of Tom, from the identity of Tom, he ensures that the good or evil was not depended on the identity, and the true love was not rely upon what class you lived. In addition, the subjects which she researched just concern the major characters. She is lack to study the common people in low class, which made her evidence was not persuaded. Yu (2003) begins to study the identity of Tom, from the identity of Tom, he ensures that the good or evil was not to depend on the identity, and the true love was not to rely upon what class you lived. Porter (1982) points out in his English Society in the Eighteenth Century that the society identity or position of men in Britain in 18th derived from their origins, depended on their properties, professions and the positions of the class where they lived.