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How time flies! In a few months' time we are going to graduate form university. Thus, there is a purplar topic about the college years have prepared you for your future life. For this, many people have different oppinions about this. Some of them think that the college years have prepared you for your future life, but the rest doesn't. As far as I concerned, I prefer to choice the first. For the first, college life is the most beautiful time of one's life, I think. It can change the old you, and you will be different. During the time, it's enough for you to study and learn something you can't get from the book,to abroad your sight, to accumulate your working experience. And second, college life is also a chance to make friends with different people. As an old saying:out by friends. Talking with different people, also can make your life different. You can get some information about the outside world or maybe you can experience other's life. The last, as we all know, the chance to get a job is becoming more and more difficult, and it takes a lot of time. The intership is a great chance to know the position you want and the requirement of the company. During the intership you should know what you really want to do. It can help you to know the reall you. Everything we do is for our future life. We want our life more brighter, more rich. And the college life will help you. If you did well, then you will have a brighter future.
