2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

A Beautiful City in China Kunming is one of the most beautiful city in China ,Kinming is the capital of Yunnan province.People named it as Spring city ,it is true ,you can see flowers and feel confortable in any season, due to the good weather , It never too hot or cold ,usually the temperature keep at 3 to 27 degree centigrade . Also you can see kinds of National customs and foods ,there are 26 Nation in Yunnan ,such as mixian , flower pie which made of flower,tea and so on , I think you will like it .