2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

适当增加一些从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；文中拼写错误稍多，词汇表达贫乏；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Teacher's day ,I taek some perent go teacher's home. Good luck my teacher . When i tack the door ,wo lising some voice forme insaid.the door opend ,simle wiht my face when i seen many student's. In the home ,we take about some thing about my teacher.We think teacher's teaching is very imporent for ous