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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。
Dear Sir, This is Hubin from F Company , we are sepcial in electronic products export and improt. We am very interested in your company's new product "5670" in New York trade show between 15th Dec. to 22 th Dec.We are very appreciate that if you could provide both instruction book and price list to us . I hope that we can establish business relationship in the future . Thank you very much ! Hubin
