内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰。
Dear Sir, This is Hubin from F Company, we are special in electronic products export and import. We am very interested in your company's new product "5670" in New York trade show between 15th Dec. to 22 th Dec.We will appreciate that if you could provide both instruction book and price list to us. I hope that we can establish business relationship in the future . Thank you very much ! Hubin