正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;结构不严谨,行文不流畅。
One day,ARthur sees a sword in a stone.Arthur thinks "How can beautiful sword get into a big stone ?"He pulls and it comes right out.But,Arthur doesn't take the sword home .It isn't his.So,he puts it back into the stone. Then,a wise old man comes to the town.His nameis Merlin.He asks everyone to try to pull the sword out of the stone.No one can do it.Arthur says,"I can."