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A beautiful city in china is Shanghai that what I thought.When I was eighteen years old.I have been go to college in Shanghai alone.That was the first one to Shanghai.I feel here was really hot in my first feeling.But now,it's the same as my hometown. Shanghai is a real beauty city in my mind.I perfect like the subway in Shanghai.It can take people to every place where people want to in Shanghai.Shanghai is a beauty city.That has many place can visit.For example,Dongfang Mingzhu Tower,Huangpu River,Nanjing Road. I had been to visit Nanjing Road.There are mang stores to shopping.And there are center in Shanghai. So,I really like Shanghai.It take a lot memory to me.
