2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A beautiful city in China is Shanghai that what I thought.When I was eighteen years old,I had go to college in Shanghai alone.That was the first to Shanghai.I feel here was really hot in my first feeling.But now,it's the same as my hometown. Shanghai is a beautiful city in my mind.I perfect like the subway in Shanghai.It can take people to everywhere people want to in Shanghai.Shanghai is a beautiful city.That has many place to visit.For example,Dongfang Mingzhu Tower,Huangpu River and Nanjing Road. I had been to visit Nanjing Road.There are mang stores to shopping.And there are center in Shanghai. So,I really like Shanghai.It take a lot memory to me.