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I am a student of English school Maybe you do not know me,but I think you will not be a stranger. I am lihua.Is a sheerful girl.Is also a high school student.Now is the time summer vacation.I was fortunate to come to English school to learn English.Forgive my knowledge of the language is really limited. But I love English very much. But here, I've had a lot of difficulties. A lot of words and grammar can't understand. I hope you can help me answer.I hope you have not been inconvenience too much. If you can,I hope next week to meet you.It will be a nice day. My contact information is as follos. Email:lihua@1236.com phone:12345678 Look forward to your reply.