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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12946
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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全文结构较为严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;多多加强从句和复杂句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Nowdays,Internet is very popular in our life.It make many friends.To be quickly know infromation all over the world. However, Internet can't instead of face to face communtion,Just like the picture,Andy seldom see each other when his computer crashes,His father and mother worried about his. I think face to face its promote our life.Accordingly,we should encourage our classmate、friend refuse additional to Internet.We can do it.

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