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As is displayed in the cartoon,there are two persons.One is A,the other is B.A is going to kicks the football to the gate,while B is protecting the gate.There are two different imagine in their mind.In A's mind,B is so big that A can not kick the football into the gate.In B's mind it is very different that the gate is too big to protect.