字数:200满分:100分
文章组织结构良好;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视。
As is displayed in the cartoon,there are two persons.One is a kicker,the other is a protector.kicker is going to kick the football to the gate,while protector is protecting the gate.There are two different imagines in their mind.In kicker's mind,protector is so big that he ker can not kick the football into the gate.In protector's mind, it is very different that the gate is too big to protect.