2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

As the contemporary society develop dramatically,using computer has become a part of our daily life,an increasing number of people,especially the young people,has attracted in Internet.The computer has used in various field,such as education,technology and culture and so on.Obviously,it is significantly vital for us in our daily life,but can the computer replace man?Undoubtedly,my answer is negative. Although the computer has bring a kind of benefit and convenient in our daily life,the computer has never replaced man.There is a great many of reason for this issue.First of all,even if the computer has a powerful ability to deal with lots of things,we should remember that it invents by man.Secondly,we should control the time on Internet to avoid ourselves to addict in network.Finally,we should build a awareness that the computer is a tool,it can not substitute our whole life. Consequently,we should make a good habit on network,and we should efficient use the computer in our study or work life.Only in this way can we have a wonderful and colorful future.