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my friend is not tall and she is a normal girl,but she have a strong charector.she always speak loundely. she has a straigh and black long hair,she is slim, she's skin has a little brown,she like singing ,she doesn't like watch film. we always talk to eacher on wechat, she is thirty six years old,now she works in a mall,she is a sales girl.