2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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i'm very glad to hear the message you will going to visit my hometown. i will take you to some interesting place. Now i will make a plan,the first place i will take you to greatwall.in my hometown miyun district have a small greatwall, the greatwall name is SiMaTai,he has a long historty and the knowlage we can learn and