牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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This weekend I duringed from Beijing animals park. There were many tourists in the park. I saw they gave foods to monkeys and played with tigers. They were so happiness and friendly. They made me believe that people can friendly with animals. We should be kind to animals. But I found some people didn't pay attention to hyginen. They threw cobbige here and there and made the park durty. I thought it's important to protect inverment. And I began to know that protect wile animals' important because protect animals just like protect ourselves.