2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Here is a survey, from Bureau of Labor Statistics and Current Population Survey, which tells us education pays in higner earnins and lower unemployment rates. People who are studied age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers. The report consists of two parts. One is the unemployment rate in2011, the other is median weekly in2011. From this report we can find: first, the rate of peoople who have les than high school diploma is largest. At the same time ,they have lowest earnings lower than average earnings. On the contrary,the rate of people who have Doctor degree is the least while they have a higher earnings than average earnings. We can arrive a conclusions from the survey that the more you pay for education and the higher diploma you have, the more earnings you get in the future. Hence we are supposed to think importance of education.