2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

It is apparent that nowadays more and more parents spoil their children,due to many of them are the only child of their family.Therefore,there's a common phenomenon that parents almost do everything for them. From my point of view,this phenomenon is of great concern,and parents'action ought to be punnished.So it is necessary for parents to learn how to help their children to be independent.First of all,advise your children to work many things out without your help,and give them courage.Furthermore,if possible,let your children live in dormitory instead of at home,and gradually,they can be independent. From what have been discussed above,we can reach a conclusion that children ought to be independent rather than in the arms of parents,only by being independent can they lead a better life.