托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第19篇:20年后人们是否会有更多的业余时间

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。

Nowadays, the majority has life under the stress. Without doubt that having more free, time is certainly included in everyone's dream life. But can this really happens in the future twenty years? Although, all of us hope this can really rise, but from my point of view, it's may be unreality. Above all, with the development of technology, there are more and more valuable or necessary things we need to figure out. To illustrate, plenty of intelligent artificial will be invented and for the easier life, people have to learn how to use them, so besides work in the company, people spend energy on learning how to use the articles of daily use, or they will stay in the same place while others keep going. Besides, since the invention becoming into a daily life necessary, without doubt that the invention needs a mass production, as a result, workers might be employed more frequently and longer. Thus, the future life might not have the time for leisure activities. In addition, because of the wide spread of network, the step of fashion spread in a rapid method. No matter the entertainment or the serious news, will be recognized as soon as they are out. In order to step with the speed of progress in the social, we have to know these news in time, therefore, during our work we need to separate part of our energy to know about the hot news. And we have to bear the stress of various. However, we devote more time to the work does not mean our work is as tired as before. What technology brings us are much more convenient means of solving problems. As a result, it will not take out too much power to deal with our complex works, Consequently, the shortcoming can be viewed while comparing with the advantages. Based on all the evidence above, from my point of view it is not possible for us to have more free time for leisure activities.