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浙江省杭州市2011-2012学年八年级英语下学期期末考试测试试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:30浏览次数:3367
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紧张的初二学习就快结束了,同学们在一起讨论这个暑假干什么,下面是同学们讨论的结果。请你根据下面的表格把学生的们讨论结果写成一篇短文。
Name
Activities
Reasons
Tina
Go to Beijing
1.     To see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing
2.     have fun
Jim
Stay at home
1.     Too tired and have a good rest
2.     ……
You
……
……
注意:1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息;
 2. 开头已经为你写好,你只需接着写;
     3. 词数:70个左右。开头的部分内容不计入总词数。
   Recently our class had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result:  
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可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Tina is a active girl and very like to travel. She want to go to Beijing that to see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing. Beacause Beijing is a old and mordern city, she can become happy and has fun in it. Jim is a slience boy and like reading books and painting. He will stay at home this summer holiday. Beacause he is too tired and need has a good rest. I will go to Suzhou provience. I need raise my kills about life and look picture of out world. These are our discussions about what we would do in the coming summer vacation.

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