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Tina is a lively girl and very like traveling. She wants to go to Beijing that to see the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing. Because Beijing is an old and faddish city, she can become happy and has fun in it. Jim is a introrse boy and likes reading books and painting. He will stay at home this summer holiday. Because he is too tired and need has a good rest. I will go to Suzhou province. I need raise my kills about life and look landscapes of out world. These are our discussions about what we would do in the coming summer vacation.