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Tina is a lively girl and likes traveling. She wants to go to Beijing and sees the Great Wall and other beautiful sights in Beijing. Because Beijing is an old and faddish city, she can become happy and has fun with it. Jim is an introrse boy and likes reading books and painting. He will stay at home this summer holiday. He feels too tired and needs a good rest. I will go to Suzhou province. I need raise my kills about life and see the landscapes of out world. These are our discussions about what we would do in the coming summer vacation.