文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少。
A new year ,a new start,when I stand on the edge of a new year,I can't help thinking about my plan of next year. Just as the old saying:“Well began is the half of the success.”So I decide that I should be at work while the others are still relaxing ,and then ,at the beginning ,I'm quicker than the others and of course I will get better result than the others. But ,what I really decide to do is that I must make good of anytime I can spare though it seems impossible. While,I will do my best to live up with what I have plann