2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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It is the high education degree that most be contributed to social employment . what's more , we can roughly draw a conclusion that excallent degree most possible bring about satisfied earnings , in the meantime , decline the unemployment rate . After analysising above figure and diagram briefly , we know education plays an so important role that can't be taken place . As is known to us all , current world is dominanted by knowledge-based economy , which should not be ignored anymore . Furthermore , receiving education means lot to ourself . on the one hand , we can broaden our horizon by means of reading . At the same time , making progress in enhancing our personality . On the other hand , high education degree raises our social place to enjoy more comfortable life instead of facing with being umemployed . In a short , knowledeg changed fate . Only through studying can the society decline the unemployment .