2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Nowadays ,Online shopping bocomes more and more popular in our world ,it is a trends of fad .as more and more people buy stuffs online ,some questions are floating out.for example:the qualities can not get promitted,and the price of the product are hard to measured,and the aftersales of the deal are hard to get.but,to be honest,it is true that online shopping makes our life more convinent than before,for instance ,we can purchase anything we want without going out:such as the furnitrues,the clothes ,the cosmetis.the best for us is that :they can delivery the goods you bought to your home .according those reasons ,in my opinion ,online shopping could be a fad in the near futrue.but ,for the healthy of the market,the authrities should supoervise the market well and make sure it circulation healthy.