2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。

It is an honour to introduce you the most interestingplace . And I would to show you The Great Wall which is a place of interest both in China and in the world. It is in Qin danasty that The Great Wall was bulit in order to resist the ememies from the north of China. During the building ,there are tens of thousands of people who give their lives to the wall . I hope you will like this wonderful Wall .