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字数:300 满分:100分
全文结构较为严谨;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
As a student ,all of our money comes from our parents. When we are little children, our parents begin teach us save food ,water and so on ,so save money is aslo important. As we all know, money is not easy to get. last summer holiday , i found a job in order to esescise myself. This job makes me very tired . I have to got up early and end in the night.From then on , i keow it's difficuty to make money ,not only meself but asly our parents.