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ladies and gentleman, Good morning! My name is Wangli, taday I will introduce Nanjing to you. Nanjing is a historic city which is located in southeast of China. It is the capital city of Jangsu province, the population of Nanjing is about 5 million. By the way, Nanjing has been existed for more than 2400 years, and there are ten danisties, which bulit their captital city at Nanjing. Besides, Nanjing is a beautiful city ,not only are there lots of view sites, such as Xuanwu Lake, Jiming Tample, Stone city etc, also there are many modern achitectures and high bulidings. At last, welcome to Nanjing, wish you have a good trip in Nanjing.
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