采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
Ladies and gentleman, Good morning! My name is Wangli, today I will introduce Nanjing to you. Nanjing is a historic city which located in the southeast of China. It is the capital city of Jangsu province, the population of Nanjing is about 5 million. By the way, Nanjing has existed for more than 2400 years, and there are ten dynasties whose capital city was built in Nanjing. In addition, Nanjing is a beautiful city, not only are there lots of view sites, such as Xuanwu Lake, Jiming Tample, Stone city etc, also there are many modern architectures and high buildings. At last, thank you for listening, I wish you have a good trip in Nanjing.
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