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初中英语命题作文真题演练(95):素质教育

发布时间:2014-03-26 17:10浏览次数:2461
要求:

为了进一步实施素质教育,山东省所有初中学生都能享受到两天的周末自由时间。在这两天的时间里,有的学生走进图书馆、书店充实自己的知识;有的加入体育俱乐部,健身强体;有的积极参加社会实践活动;还有的在家帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务……你是怎么度过的?你对两天周末有何看法?请以Finally, Week Ends为题写一篇80词左右的文章。
提示:

1、素质教育quality education两天周末 two-day-weekend 充实,丰富enrich社会实践social practice 社会society

2、不要出现真实的人名和学校名。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中高级词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

In order to the implementation of quality education,the whole students of Shangdong Junior high school had two-day-weekend.During this weekend,most of students went to the library to increase their knowledge and some students took part in the gym for boby's health.There were plenty of students at home,however,they were able to help their parents do some housework.How did I spend my holidays,I saw a movie named Iris and visited some part museums of Shanghai.On the way,I didn't know the way to the famous spot,so I asked a stranger for help.After had been asked the way,as soon as I was ready to go there,I lost.Passing the thing like this,I have already understood students must have social practise more.Finally,I got a map from a little girl who had two big black eyes and long hair.I said thanks to her and she gave me a warm welcome greet with smiling.

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