2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online shopping Yesterday I bought a mobile phone from JingDong website . And I guess it very be a very nice experience shopping online . From the shopping website you could search what you want , what others estimate .It is very convenience for us . And now it is also a fashional trend go shopping on line. Many of us have learn that shopping online it is really very convenience for us , we could save many time and save some money . They will also send these goods to us through EXPRESS .It is very fast .But there is still have some problems . For example ,When the goods have some quality problem ,some times we will have to wait a long time to wait the return goods.And these goods shows online it have some diffience with which we received one.As some of the goods online it is very cheap ,many person cannot resist heself to shopping online which is not useful for he/her. From my opinion , when we shopping online we must think twice and then get it .