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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误。
Before I buyed the computer,I talk to my parents everyday,and everyday we are happy.After I buyed the computer,I often in my room play the computer,work or communicate with my friends.Sometimes my mom come to my room,want to talk to me,I am busy playing the computer,and ingore my mom.I was addicted to the computer,that don't realize I don't talk to my parents long times. Once time,I saw a news on the computer,that is a family are waiting for dinner,and the children are playing their phone,that makes the grandpa angry,he knocked the table and gone.I just realized that I also ingore my parents,I spend too much on electronic communication,and ingore face-to-face communication. From then on,I limited the time on computer,and talk to my parents everyday.I found that my parents are more happy.
