2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

全文结构较为严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

According to the picture we can see that people are playing the smartphone on the road.To play the smartphone isn't carefully when across the road for people.Everyone take a walk sticks in order to guide the direction. But what is the reason of this phenaminon?The first,telephones are more and more smarting,people can sanning network on it.Second, nowadays peoples are more and more busy,they use smartphone frequently.The last but not the least,the internet more and more quickly,which make people convenience. In my opinion,smartphone is very important,it can take us messages,news and knockledges.But it's very dangerous when we are accorsing the road use it ,we aren't relay on it everytime.