2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写。

It is not wise to get a result from what you have saw or heard. because what you see or you heard maybe not the truth, you can only get the result after you try to kown what happend before,or why thay act like this, for example, you see a lady say something bad to a man, who looks poor, then maybe at that moment, you will think the lady is not good, but you don't know what happend to the lady, maybe, the man just did something bad to her, or, she thinks a man should have reponsbility, not like this, so, next time, don't get the concusion so soon, learn to see what's really happend then judge.