单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;从句使用量太少;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
A Beautiful City in China China is the beautiful country in the world.There are many beautiful place in China.My hometown Wuhan is one of the beautiful city in it. Wuhan is famous for lake.As we all known,Wuhan has many lakes,such as east lake,west lake est.When we take a bote in the lake,we can see many beautiful sights.In the morning,we can take a walk in the avenue near the lake.Expect the lake,Wuhan's park is as we all known.