Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。
have a problem! I like playing computer games very much. I often play it after I finish my homework. But my mother tells me to study hard and she often stops me from(阻止)playing games. So we often argue about(争吵) that. What should I do? Please help me! Yours, Peter Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think