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中国人民大学附中八年级英语期末试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-15 17:50浏览次数:1668
要求:
根据中文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短信。
假设你是校刊编辑David,收到了你校学生Peter的来信。请你根据他给你的信件内容写一封回信,谈谈你对他玩游戏的看法及解决问题的建议。
Dear David,
I have a problem! I like playing computer games very much. I often play it after I finish my homework. But my mother tells me to study hard and she often stops me from(阻止)playing games. So we often argue about(争吵) that. What should I do? Please help me!
Yours,

Peter

回信如下:

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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David

用户的作文(系统评分42.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;运用了一些简单从句,但不是很熟练;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

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have a problem! I like playing computer games very much. I often play it after I finish my homework. But my mother tells me to study hard and she often stops me from(阻止)playing games. So we often argue about(争吵) that. What should I do? Please help me! Yours, Peter Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think

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