2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

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the Mid-Autumn Festival is the most important traditional lunar calendar festival in China.It is the unusual time that people can get well along with their families.The moon represent the people getting united.On the other hand ,they always enjoy the tasty mooncake and admire the moon.On the other hand,chatting on the dialy life with their families ,in order to strengh the relationship between the family.In addition,varies activities are also the people's fond of choose.Some go traval ,visit relatives and so on . It is such an attrative and various festival!