语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用。
There is no deny that the spread of information has been more and more wide in recent years.Moreover,some people are busy making decision to accomplish something once getting some massages,due to the way of accepting information has been increased.Therefore,it's unwise for people to get some conclusion once seeing or hearing something,instead of thinking it over and over again.
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