作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。
There is no denying that the spread of information has been more and more wide in recent years.Moreover,some people are busy making decision to accomplish something once getting some massages,due to the way of accepting information has been increased.Therefore,it's unwise for people to get some conclusions right now once seeing or hearing something,instead of thinking it over and over again. Obviously,there are some adequate and rational reasons to explain why we shouldn't make a decision as fast as gaining some information.The first and foremost,you maybe get the fake massage if you don't verify it,and it will bring the big disaster to your business and enterprise.Furthermore,the time of collecting the material you need too short, imply that you gain the material too partly to accomplish the plan completly.Last but not least,you will get the more satisfying results once you collect the complete information and consider it many times.
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