文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。
There is no denying that the spread of information has been more and more wide in recent years.Moreover,some people are busy making decision to accomplish something once getting some massages,due to the way of accepting information has been increased.Therefore,it's unwise for people to get some conclusions right now once seeing or hearing something,instead of thinking it over and over again. Obviously,there are some adequate and rational reasons to explain why we shouldn't make a decision as fast as gaining some information.The first and foremost,you maybe get the fake massage if you don't verify it,and it will bring the big disaster to your business and enterprise.Furthermore,the time of collecting the material you need too short, implies that you gain the material too partly to accomplish the plan completely.Last but not least,you will get the more satisfying result once you collect the complete information and consider it many times. In summary,whatever learning anything,you should get adequate material before you start to do it.Consequently,only by making adequate perpare and gaining complete information can you get successful finally.
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