题目要求:
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解:
题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。
文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。
It should be reasonable and understandable to say that Advertisement has intruding nearly into all aspects of our daily life, therefore, it will be unreasonable to claim that advertisement cannot influence our life. However, it is definitely overestimated by saying that advertisement has already make us all want the same and do the same under its influence. All of us can feel that TV, movie, internet, and countless Apps in mobile phones today are profoundly reshaping, guiding and changing the recipients’ consumption mode. Even the little baby is being influenced by the advertisement and they are now able to click on the screen with their fingers to require their parents to satisfy his/her demand; not to mention the other adults who has been more affected by diverse promotion channels. Generally speaking, with the development of technology in the field fo advertisement, the function of ads is sure to be enhanced and its effects will become more powerful in reshaping our daily life. Nevertheless, no matter how influential the ads may become, the range of ads influence is still within a limit, because each individual has its own independent character and personal preference; the likes and dislikes for each one cannot become the same. To give it more visibility, we can see the resemblance in this scene: one river (ads) carries innumerable boats and ships and rafts (consumers), roughly we can say that they are going the same way either upstream or downstream, but their destinations are quite different at end. To sum up, the trend is that the ads becomes increasingly influential on our daily life, but the ads buster is still not a superman with limitless power to make all people think the same and the same.