小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Song Jixian was one of my best friend. His was my classmate when we studied in Hunan Machinary Techghnician School. During that two years we learned in the school, we biult strong friendly relationship. 175 cm high with white skin, Song was goodlooking and girls loved him. Becuse he was good at singing songs. All of us in the class called him handsome boy. Whem we met eachother, we both were only 16. At that time, we studied at . We were living at the same room and he slept above me. In the bite cool witer, we slept together in the same bed to get warm eachother. So we biult very good friendship during those two years. After graduated for the school, he went back to Changsha, lived with his family. Then he bacame a businessman. 4 years later, his got merried. His wife was young and very chaming, very beautiful. However, such a good friend left me too early. Hi was killed by a trafic accident when he was only 24 years old. He left his parents and his young wife passed away to another world. We all miss him very much.