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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17431[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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文中衔接词丰富;采用了一些简单的从句;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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Today more and more people use computer . Because the computer can deal with many things which are complex and difficulty. To be a man we just can deal with easy and sample matters . But if we want to accomplish hard job ,the computer is neccessory and musted . There are many numbers should be figure out in a short time or maybe we shoule finish a action or step by machine which are controled by computer. So the computer is important to people who lived in today . But when people use computer frencountly ,in other side they comunicate with others more and more shortly . also it cause much more problems. people should learn the computer ,working on it sometime they have a rest also through watch movie or play game on it . long time the people become chanting seldom and longly .they begin to adapte alone and seldom to chant . The home became to lose warm and come to quilt . the children without take care cause their dad or mom are sat before the computer. in fact we should use computer but not deply to it .is not we are controled by computer not use it .so people should recognize it and use computer correctly.

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