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高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:15浏览次数:11038
要求:
假如你是一位足球爱好者,请你根据下列要点提示,以“My favorite sport”为题写一篇110词左右的短文。
1 踢足球是你的最大爱好;
2 一次偶然的机会让你爱上了踢球;在回家路上捡到一个足球,然后就和朋友们一起玩,从此深深地爱上了踢球;
3 经常和同学一起训练和比赛;
4 最喜欢的足球明星是英国的贝克汉姆;最大的愿望是成为一名职业足球运动员。
参考词汇: 偶然 by chance 职业运动员 a professional football player
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可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

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My Favorite Sport As we all know, we have our special thing in our mind. So I think your hobby is very impotant thing in your life. For me,football is my favorite sport. There are some reasons that make me like football. Maybe it is very fun. Oneday I picked up a football on my way home,and I play with my friends. The football gave me many things and made me think many things. So that day I felt very happy and like playing football with my friends after school. There has a football team in our school, and I am a teammate of the team. I am not hurry go home after school,and I always play with my teammates. Football made me make many feiends, so I do not feel lonely when I alone. My idol is British football player Beckham. Do you know my dream? Yes, my dream is to be a professional football player.And I will play football in many cities.

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