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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5594
要求:
用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

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