小学二年级英语作文:My pet

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句采用很棒；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

I have a pay,it is a dog,it is very strong and very smart,our family all love it,it's name is devil,it has two vevy nice eyes,and a sensitive nose,four long legs,so it runing so fast.it like sleep in the daytime,and it work in the night.it like eating bone and mouse.i am very happy to have a pay like it