采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
I have a pay,it is a dog,it is very strong and very smart,our family all love it,it's name devil,it has two very nice eyes,and a sensitive nose,four long legs,so it runing so fast.It likes sleeping in the daytime,and it work in the night.It likes eating bone and mouse.i am very happy to have a pay like it