托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；作者在句法层面做的很棒。

A business can never achieve prosperous feats without astute asset allocation. Comparatively speaking, it is considerably vital for an entrepreneur to appreciate the value of innovation, quality and other real aspects of the products, which have an impact on the popularity and longevity of a so called “brand”. In this respect, it is irrational for a company to distribute more money at superficial areas, particularly in advertising. To begin with, the majority of the advertisements have tiny impacts upon customers when they are exposed to large selection of goods in shops or online. Owing to a wide range of exaggerating advertisements which are severely deviate from the real conditions, customers tend to hold conservative attitudes towards them even some of them were publicized by influential celebrities. Naobaijin, for example, a famous Chinese nutritional beverage asserts the function of becoming younger in its advertisement broadcasting in the television again and again, yet nobody will believe they can actualize the fact as it said. So it is a waste of money to carry out the advertising promotion. Moreover, as for a company, nothing can be more prudent than elevating the quality of the goods and services, which are the most effective “spokesman” to them. With more attention attached to its products and services, a company could receive more compliments and attractions, triggering larger customer groups and sales revenue. For instance, a small restaurant, located at the corner of a narrow lane in my city, has little pedestrian pasted by, became a popular one in the last year. The underlying reason for this phenomenon is that some people went into it without any expectations surprisingly get the delicious meal and splendid serves with satisfaction to leave. The next time, during the weekends or when they are in their vacation, they could go into raptures to invite their friends, colleagues and their family members to consume at there again. Past few months have witnessed the increased number of the customers. Without any advertising expenses, the restaurant became one of the most successful ones in my town. Although some companies could achieve prosperity by a large number of advertisements here and there, it is still unavoidable to trap into a false business model. An advertisement which is not catering to the publics’ appetites or putting into a wrong position could lose their potential customers. As far as I am concerned, there is no need for companies disburse more expenses related to publicity than their current level.